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    Mike McCambridge
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    35 IAC 310
    From:
    “Connelly, Deborah” connelly@legis.state.il.us
    To:
    “Erin CONLEY” CONLEYE@ipcb.state.il.us
    Date:
    1/11/2004 2:15 PM
    S
    Subject:
    351AC310
    JAN!3200
    PoIIu~g~LLI~O~
    Erin:
    fO!
    In addition to the version we sent you where the changes we made
    are highlighted
    in green:
    1.
    Authority Note:
    Don’t underline the
    comma
    after
    13.3.
    2.
    104(a)(2)
    —
    307.1501
    et
    seq.
    —.
    please
    provide specific section numbers rather than
    “et
    seq.”.
    3.
    105(c)
    —
    after 40 CFR 2.302 provide new date.
    4.
    111(a)
    —
    Underline the comma after “facility” since the comma is not on
    file.
    5.
    201(a)
    —
    delete “must”, restore “shall” so prohibition will make sense.
    6.
    221(a)(1)(B) and (b)(1)
    —
    delete “that”, restore
    “which” so sentence makes sense.
    7.
    230(f)
    —
    There
    is a comma on file after “4-day average”. You should add it to PCB version then strike it.
    8.
    232, 432(c)(1)
    —
    2nd
    line
    —
    “must”
    or “shall”?
    9.
    233(a)(1)
    &
    (2)
    -
    you have
    an explanation
    of “SUM (Ci) ~
    but it
    doesn’t
    show up in the actual formula.
    The under
    “d” you have “A)
    B)
    &
    C)”
    when you
    should have
    dot points
    or bullets.
    10.
    302, next to
    last line
    in PCB
    version
    —
    after “pretreatment” add
    “standard”
    to
    reflect
    text on file.
    L
    11. 320(b)(1)
    —
    in
    “z”, first line,
    spell
    “occured”
    correctly to
    reflect text on file.
    12. 432(c)(2)
    —
    strike “fourteen”
    and add
    “14”.
    13.
    510(a)(6)(B)& (b)(7)(B)&
    541 &
    544
    & 603(c) & 621(b)(c)—
    “must”
    or “shall”?
    14.
    541,
    3rd line
    —
    “change
    “Section” to
    “Sections”
    to reflect text on file.
    15.
    542(b)
    —
    check
    capitalization
    of
    “state”
    and
    “State”.
    16.
    602(e)(6)(B)
    —
    add a
    space
    to “accordancewith”.
    17.
    621
    header
    —
    strike
    “POTW’s”
    and
    add “POTWs”.
    18.
    633
    —
    “(c)(9)” or “(c)(6)”?
    19.
    633, 930 —“415
    ILCS 5/Title Xli”
    is unnecessary
    since
    “Act”
    is defined.
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    20.
    634(b),
    last
    sentence
    —
    use
    will
    or shall
    since you’re
    stating fact not
    telling someone to
    do something.
    21. 635(a)(2)
    —
    Change “180 days of the
    effective
    date
    of this
    rule”
    to a specific date. Also in (c)
    22. 701
    —
    “requester” on file
    —
    see
    7
    12(b)
    and
    (f).
    23.
    703(a)&(b) & (c)
    —
    delete must, add will.
    24.
    705
    —
    add “G” after
    “Subpart”.
    25.
    706(a), 713, 722(b), 902
    —
    must or shall?
    Let me know
    Thanks
    dc
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